English Final Paper

 

 

 

                                                     Passion Drives Revenge and Redemption

Hamlet Final Essay

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Daniel White

 

 

EnglishIIIIA

Ms. Wilson

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Daniel White

 Passion Drives Revenge and Redemption

Daniel White

    Just as in Hamlet every story has an element of redemption or revenge in it and most of the time these feelings are driven by an innate passion for a person or an ideal. Whether this is to prove oneself to friends or family, get revenge for a wrongdoing to oneself or family, or to right a wrong that they feel they need to redeem themselves for. Stories like Hercules come to mind when it comes to redeeming a wrong. Stories like The Punisher and Death Sentence come to mind in the revenge category. Each of the characters in Hamlet goes through a personal or public conflict or revelation that makes them either realize something life changing.

    For Hamlet the “To be or not to be” speech was really a big turning point in the story for him he was starting to realize that life may not be worth living if it is a life that is always ruled by fear or insanity. This later shows up in his clearly insane motives for his actions later on in Hamlet, the earlier events that strained Hamlet, such as his mother’s lake of empathy in the kings passing. All of this strain was what seemed to be a point of redemption that Hamlet wanted to prove to the people of Denmark. Even though he was seen as a failure he made the point of bettering himself to redeem what he perceived as shortcomings.

        Ophelia also applies to these concepts because of the internal and also somewhat public conflict of her and Hamlets relationship. Polonius was obviously very against it because he saw Hamlet as a passing fad that Ophelia would be infatuated with for a week. Polonius conveyed this to her in act one scene 3 and she seemed to get the point but the chance at a relationship with Hamlet always had her happy and she would have not passed up the chance if it had presented it.

As for the King and Queen a lot can be said for what goes on throughout the story. The blame for what happens to the country of Denmark can be put on the shoulders of the queen her marriage of the Kings brother almost instantaneously after the king passes has the biggest repercussions of the whole book it. It showed he lack of remorse for her husband’s passing, a lack of common courtesy to her husband’s memory, and ultimately the lack of love for her husband while he was alive. The worst part about it wasn’t even the repercussions it had on her; it was the repercussions it had on Hamlets mental fortitude and the county of Denmark. It showed the lack of feelings or pride she held in herself and in return, since she is the queen of the country, the lack of pride she had in the country. As the queen she should have seen that people would be looking to her the hard time of the kings and her husband’s passing. By moving on immediately and not showing an ounce of grief it showed she was thinking of herself before the nation she had sworn to lead above almost anything else.

     The thought that there was decay, disease and death to Denmark was a clear and correct observation of what was going on in Denmark at the time of Hamlets story. It seemed that nothing could go right for anyone in the kingdom and that Denmark was slowly degrading and breaking down to a broken down, failed city state was very relevant in the text. In this context the redemption factor that has been discussed come back into play because you get the feeling that Hamlet saw this happening and almost felt a call of duty to his passed father to bring back “his” nation to the past glory it had once enjoyed. It was almost as if Hamlet saw that if he could restore Denmark to what it was all of his perceived shortcomings would be redeemed.

 

In conclusion Hamlet is a literary tale that has as many tales and symbolism of revenge and redemption as any feature movie of today’s culture. Whether it’s the pursuit of a girl, the redemption of oneself or ones country, or the revenge for a fallen loved one, there will always be a reason for one to go a perceived vision quest or mission to redeem one selves shortcomings. Hamlet was a tale of love, insanity, and passion. It is a tale that will always thrive because it is something everyone can relate to; the need to feel accomplished.

Daniel White Hamlet Comments.

Blog Post 1(Eric Chen)

This explanation of how your life is better now than it was before Hamlet is almost comical in its lake of sincerity. If you had taken anybody else's feelings into account, for instance Hamlets, these unfortunate events that have taken place may have not happened. Running off with you husbands brother right after he passed was an irresponsible thing to do and has show to have weighed on Hamlets mind more than anyone had ever suspected.

Blog Post 2(Eric Chen)

The connections that you made from the Bourne movie to Hamlet are amazingly accurate. The lack of trust in the kingdom and the lack of trust between anyone in the movie have parallels in reasoning as well. Both of the characters are running from problems that will eventually catch up to them. The prevalence of betrayal in the both stories is significant because its all about the chase for one person, in most ways, in both stories.

Blog Post 3(Eric Chen)

I disagree as well with the statement that Hamlet must love Claudius. Hamlets infidelities have been much more than forgivable and have led to events that can not be reversed. Ultimately Hamlets wrongdoings sealed his fate as a betrayer of nations and this can not be undone. Unfortunately his fate was what he had coming to him and probably ended better than most saw it ending.

Blog Post 4(Eric Chen)

I agree with Michael on this one the mirror was a great way to represent the inner struggles of Hamlet. I felt it also highlighted his To be or not to be speech because it allows him to look into his inner self, see the discrepancies, and see that his wrongdoings have led to create problems that are tearing the kingdom apart.

Blog Post 5 (Eric Chen)

Ophelia was caught in an unfortunate situation in Hamlet. Normally Hamlet would have been a companion worth pursuing. In this situation though, with all of the mental and physical stress Hamlet would have led her down a dark path, as he did with himself. The stress that Hamlet experienced would have also worn no Ophelia. I was right when I told her that hamlet was a weekly fad and to not give him the time of day.

Blog Post 6 (Eric Chen)

A love song here is the only thing that thoroughly describes the situation. Your ability to fall in love so fast mirrors that of teenage relationships. Your ability to move on so quickly is a scary indicator that you were never really invested in the relationship and didn't really care that moving on so fast made you look bad. Your first husband gave you everything and you quickly just shrugged it off to get with next good looking guy. It is truly sad that you would be that unwilling to invest even a tiny bit of love into a marriage with a man you said you loved.

Daniel White Blog Post 6

Blog Post 6

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I chose Johnny Cash to represent the Story of Hamlet

You can run on for a long time

Run on for a long time, run on for a long time

Sooner or later God'll cut you down

Sooner or later God'll cut you down

Go tell that long tongue liar, go and tell that midnight rider

Tell the rambler, the gambler, the back biter

Tell 'em that God's gonna cut 'em down

Tell 'em that God's gonna cut 'em down

Well, my goodness gracious let me tell you the news

My head's been wet with the midnight dewI've been down on bended knee

Talkin' to the man from Galilee

He spoke to me in the voice so sweet

I thought, I heard the shuffle of the angel's feet

He called my name and my heart stood still

When he said, "John, go do my will"

Go tell that long tongue liar, go and tell that midnight rider

Tell the rambler, the gambler, the back biter

Tell 'em that God's gonna cut 'em down

Tell 'em that God's gonna cut 'em down

You can run on for a long time

Run on for a long time, run on for a long time

Sooner or later God'll cut you down

Sooner or later God'll cut you down

Well, you may throw your rock and hide your hand

Workin' in the dark against your fellow man

But as sure as God made black and white

What's down in the dark will be brought to the light

You can run on for a long time

Run on for a long time, run on for a long time

Sooner or later God'll cut you down

Sooner or later God'll cut you down

Go tell that long tongue liar, go and tell that midnight rider

Tell the rambler, the gambler, the back biter

Tell 'em that God's gonna cut you down

Tell 'em that God's gonna cut you down

Tell 'em that God's gonna cut you down

 

This song represents the story of Hamlet because it represents all of the characters wrongdoings and mistakes eventually being redeemed through fate or happening by a higher power. These wrongdoings could come from Ophelia’s wrongdoings or Hamlets insanity, either way all of the wrongdoings are eventually redeemed by a higher power or outside source “getting even” whether that’s by killing loved ones, self-doubt, or even the loss of a willingness to live. At its pinnacle this song really does break Hamlet down to what it is at its most basic form, it is a tale about how if you do bad or wrong things sooner or later they will come back to bite you. Even though you may live a life of luxury, you had to do something to get there and if those things were things to be looked down upon, sooner or later they will come back and take revenge on you. Whether or not that’s in a physical, mental, or spiritual form won’t matter, the fact is that you will be punished for your wrongdoings one way of another.

Daniel White Hamlet Blog Post 5

Blog Post 5

Ophelia’s portrayal in the criticism is one of a damsel in distress kind of role he says she is “Trapped in Denmark” this is simply not true, it is possible to see Ophelia’s predicament as something she brought onto herself because of her earlier actions with Hamlet and the King. She could also almost be blamed for what has happened regarding the kingdom of Denmark. As mentioned before Denmark has a certain something wrong with it, a decay or death to it, these attributes could be somewhat affiliated with Ophelia’s misdoings. While Ophelia’s misdoings may have been seen as something done out of grief of loss there is no doubt that there is also blame to be put on her for continuing these proceedings after that grief had passed. The fact that she didn’t correct these wrongdoings once that pain of grief had passed is another reason that a lot of the blame for all of the events that transpired during the story of Hamlet. The other issue that Ophelia faced throughout the story was the relationship with Hamlet that drove both of them to a breaking point that could have been avoided if they had just shut it down in the beginning like I had tried to do. The basic concept that is seen throughout all of these points is that a lot of the conflict that was seen throughout Hamlet could have been avoided if Ophelia would have had a more level head through most of the dire situations that were presented to her in the story.

Daniel White Blog Post 4

Blog Post 4

In his soliloquy Hamlet is wondering if the crazy life he is living is really worth living. He wonders this because he is feeling heartbroken and down. He is afraid of what happens after death, hence him wondering the dreams during deaths’ sleep. He is going over everything that has happened in his head and is debating whether or not it is worth putting up with anymore.

Some imagery that refers to the uncertainty of death is wondering what dreams occur durings deaths “Sleep” this gives the common reader the ability to imagine what Hamlet is imagining because everyone has slept and had dreams and can now imagine what death might be like and how we don’t know what happens after death. Imagery that hamlet uses to represent the negative experiences in life is when he mentions being humiliated, the abuse of superiors, being insulted be arrogant people, broken hearts, wrongdoings of the courts, rudeness in everyday life. This gives most people at least one, if not many, experiences that they have in common with Hamlet at this certain time period. They have this connection because everyone has had a mishap that has caused humiliation, been yelled at, or has done something wrong. This gives them common ground with Hamlet that allows them to somewhat feel what he is feeling. Hamlet uses Pathos to appeal to readers because he is arguing whether or not living with all of the negative emotions in life is worth fighting for or if it would just be easier to remove oneself from this life. The two metaphors he uses in the speech are describing death as a sleep and describing the negative emotions of life as the “grunt and sweat” of an “exhausting” life. Hamlet comes to the conclusion that life is not worth living and that it may be more pertinent to just end it.

Daniel White Blog Post 3

Blog Post 3

I chose to represent my blog with Red and Blue colors. Red because of the love and some might say tragedy between Ophelia and Hamlet “Ay, springes to catch woodcocks. I do know, When the blood burns, how prodigal the soul Lends the tongue vows. These blazes, daughter, Giving more light than heat, extinct in both Even in their promise as it is a-making, You must not take for fire. From this time Be somewhat scanter of your maiden presence. Set your entreatments at a higher rate Than a command to parley. For Lord Hamlet, Believe so much in him that he is young, And with a larger tether may he walk Than may be given you. In few, Ophelia, Do not believe his vows, for they are brokers Not of that dye which their investments show, But mere implorators of unholy suits, Breathing like sanctified and pious bawds, The better to beguile. This is for all: I would not, in plain terms, from this time forth, Have you so slander any moment leisure, As to give words or talk with the Lord Hamlet. Look to ’t, I charge you. Come your ways.”(1.3.115-135) and for the blood shed that has taken place. Blue was chosen because it represents the royalty of the situation taking place between the king and queen and also has the connotation of being the color of the male human figure which has a lot to do with what is going on right now because it involves a lot of men fighting over the throne and women.

I didn’t chose a certain font because I am not one who like to complicate things by changing them if there already working. Simpler is better in my eyes. I think a lot of problems we are having now with hamlet if more people looked at life this way. The imagery I used in the blog was a lion for the strength I need during these hard times, I also used a balance because I need to remember to be fair in all judgment that I put on people. It also reminds me that during these times of incredible insanity, and at times stupidity, I always need to be smart and think through all the decisions I make because they will not only affect my life but also the lives of the ones around me that I love.

Daniel White Blog Post 2

Blog Post 2

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“I Will Find You”

In Taken, the main characters daughter is kidnapped in Paris and sold into prostitution. As the main character is a former CIA agent he is able to use his skill set from previous jobs to track down his daughters kidnappers through phone tapping and surveillance. He then takes revenge on those kidnappers by either killing them of putting them through incredible amounts of pain.

I have been wondering what Laertes has been doing while in Paris “Marry, well said, very well said. Look you, sir, Inquire me first what Danskers are in Paris, And how, and who, what means, and where they keep What company at what expense; and finding By this encompassment and drift of question That they do know my son, come you more nearer Than your particular demands will touch it. Take you, as ’twere, some distant knowledge of him, As thus: “I know his father and his friends, And, in part, him.” Do you mark this, Reynaldo?” (2.1.7-15) as such I have sent my servant to find Laertes in Paris. As in the movie the main character says “He will find you” that is what I am feeling towards Laertes. “Marry, sir, here’s my drift: (And I believe it is a fetch of wit) You, laying these slight sullies on my son As ’twere a thing a little soiled i' th' working— Mark you, your party in converse, him you would sound, Having ever seen in the prenominate crimes The youth you breathe of guilty, be assured He closes with you in this consequence: “Good sir” or so, or “Friend,” or “Gentleman,” According to the phrase or the addition Of man and country.” (2.1.38-49.) Laertes will be easy to spot if he has been acting out of line and it should be easy for my servant to find him, although I hope he hasn’t. “Observe his inclination in yourself” (2.1.70.) My use of a servant as a spy is much like the use of a news correspondent in the movie to find out the main characters daughters location without revealing the main characters identity to the kidnappers.

Daniel White Blog Post one

  Blog Post 1

  I gave the advice I did to Laertes because as it says in (1.3.73.) “And they in France of the best rank and station” Because Laertes is going to France he needs to make sure he is able to fit in in a place where “For the apparel oft proclaims the man” (1.3.72.) That is why I told Laertes to buy as much clothes as possible. In also told him he should not be quick to judge and should never pick a fight, but to always hold his own once he is in one. Most importantly though I told him to be true to himself, because doing that will keep him honest to everyone he meets and will not lead him astray from the morally correct path.

As for Ophelia I am wondering a great bit about her and Hamlet, Hamlet has spent a lot of time with Ophelia. I have also heard that Ophelia may have not been conducting herself with the restraint I would like to see out of my daughter. She calls it “Affection” I call it Hamlets attempts on her. Ophelia must be able to see pasts this boys cheap attempts on her womanhood. As I said “Affection! Pooh, you speak like a green girl, Unsifted in such perilous circumstance. Do you believe his “tenders,” as you call them?” (1.3.101-103.) Ophelia is simply being played for physical pleasure not for the love of who she is. Hamlets “promises” to Ophelia are but simple fashion “Ay, “fashion” you may call it. Go to, go to.”(1.3.102.) this further shows hamlets affection for Ophelia is but a short term romp and as her father I cannot allow her to make such a mistake. Ophelia should not waste her time with hamlet as it will only lead to disappointment, heartbreak, and embarrassment.